Talk:Return to Return to Oz/@comment-36627132-20190916213834

By "one of the greatest movies of all time" I was referring to Return to Oz, rather than the Wizard of Oz which is referenced throughout the story.

Unfortunately being based on a great movie doesn't mean a great pasta.

First off, the parts that take place in the author's life are boring.

Second, it is annoying that the author refers to Dorothy's companions as "it" rather than "he".

Third "The evil witch, Mombi, she is captured by the heroes." actually, no she is imprisoned by the Nome King.

And finally, I should mention that the grammar is all over the place.