Talk:Shadow walker/@comment-43619694-20190825163216/@comment-36627132-20190825201029

I'm glad to hear that you can accept criticism, and that you're going to try again. To be fair it isn't the worst thing I've ever read, and it isn't that bad for (what I'm assuming is) a first attempt.

The best thing to do when it comes to writing is to keep trying. I wish you good luck, and I know that if you keep at it you'll have hit.