Talk:Moana: Directors Cut/@comment-39534673-20190910201107/@comment-38239143-20190910202109

Ok, I admire your honesty, however I think some of your points can be countered.

1. The story mentions, multiple times mind you, that none of this is scary and the situations are exagerated, I see the complaint of this being a cliched pasta, however many other pastas have just abused cliches, such as last months PoTM, so I don't see why abusing cliches is wrong, it's kind of a theme on this wiki

2. Care to explain what's wrong with the formatting? This gives me litterally no idea how to improve this when you just say "Format bad i don't like"

3. How is it incoherant? I'm just describing events happening, stories such as '''SPONGEBAOB GOZ ON RAMPAG CUZ HEZ DEPRESED AND HIZ PARENTZ HAT HIMMM 4 SOM REZON AND HE DEN GOZ IN HIZ BASMENT DEN HE SAYZ HE WANTZ 2 KIL DEN HE GOZ ON A RAMPAG DEN HE RULZ BIKINI BOTOM DEN HE HAZ A HART ATTAC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Y IZ DIS TITLE SO LONGGGG''' do the same thing, you, again, give me no pointers on how to improve, you just say "Don't like because bad written lol".

I don't have a problem with you critisizing me, however you gave me no pointers on how to improve, you bring up stuff wrong with this story and add nothing further.