Talk:Voicebox/@comment-39534673-20191210015708

This is the tutorial in how you bore the reader in the most painful way.

This story wastes your time and brain cells. It's terrible beyond reasonable measure.

The main character is a Mary Sue. Not a funny Mary Sue like Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven, but a very boring, edgy and unlikable one, just like everyone else in this story.

Everyone except the main characters are just for fan-service. They don't do anything meaningful or interesting to the stupid main plot, which is basically Voicebox being inconsistent about her love with the virgin and loser Toby and also random shit happening for no reason other than add pointless violence and drama.

The story drags itself way too much. There are chapters full of characters doing absolutely nothing but mundane stuff like brushing their hair, eating dinner, having a shower, sleeping, etc. I mean, god! They are """supernatural""" people with super powers and shit. Make them do something like shooting laser, flying, beating people up or something. At least I would be slightly entertained.

I do not recommend anyone to read this rubbish even "for the lulz" because it's not a "so bad it's funny" type of story. It's just unbelievably boring and cringy.