Talk:Moana: Directors Cut/@comment-39534673-20190910201107

I know there are Trollpastas which use lots of Crappypasta cliches to satirize them and get a laugh from the reader. However, you didn't saritize the cliches, you just overused them. This makes the reading boring because it's the same thing as any other clichéd pasta.

It's also worth mention the fact I couldn't comprehend what was happening due the poor formatting and general lack of coherent narrative.