Talk:I HATE YOU/@comment-39534673-20191030015451

You know when you failed miserably at making a satire when people thought it was trying to be serious.

Besides that, this story is boring. Literally nothing interesting or funny happens. It has no build up for comedy and the narrative makes no sense whatsoever. And no, the "explanations" the story provides doesn't explain crap about what is going on with the characters and their surroundings. It's clichéd (note that being a "trollpasta" doesn't excuse the huge cliche count if you don't even bother making fun of them in a creative way) and the main character is basically a talking plank. It is just there to narrate and trying to be funny.

Overall, this is a example in how you shouldn't write a Trollpasta. It has everything bad about Crappypastas and the attempts at being funny fell really flat, making it unfunny and cringe worth. Avoid repeating the same mistakes displayed in this story at all costs.

P.S. Don't use MS Paint to make pixel sprites.