Talk:Shadow walker/@comment-43619694-20190825163216

Hi, I'm the writer of this xD honestly your right it wasn't. you actually made me re-make it. well unpublished yet. I had taken the story based off one I wrote when I was around 8-9 years old. which shows it sucks lol. ill be changing the (hopefully) the whole thing to fix it up. I understand why it ended up on LOLpasta it was really bad. but it makes me want to do better next time. and this time to not use a story basis from a couple of years ago. thanks for the criticism it actually helped me, maybe now I can write a story that's actually decent. to those who edited and started drama please don't, I understand why it was put on here and ok with it. if it wasn't for them putting on this I wouldn't have realized how really bad it was. I had already been thinking of re-doing the story and this gives me a good excuse to. either way thank you